A dissease? A great power?

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A dissease? A great power?

Post  Shonzo on Fri Jun 11, 2010 4:52 pm

Shonzo lay in the sand defeated and dying. He wouldnt be able to help. He could here her scream. If he cold just muster the enegy...

10 days ago Shonzo had been hearing stories. Stories f a ninja kalled kimamaru. He was feared. Black hand for the notorious Orochimaru. Shonzo knew of his kekegenki. He could apparently make the bones pretrude from hs body like a sheild. His bones were as hard as steel. Yet he hadnt been spotted fighting alot. Why was that?

Shonzo snuk into the room of records. He had looked for the file named classified. He hd been searching in th dank room for around ten minutes when. Papercut. Ouch! Shonzo's kekegenki allowed his skin to rappidly heal. He was about to give up when he saw a file. It was old and dusty but, BINGO! The one he was looking for. He read late into the night.

Shonzo was there in the morning. He was lookin oer the final parts of the file when the section on annatomy. Yet it just stated...unknown. Shonzo looked in confusion. How had this happend? Shonzo would have to investigate. Shonzo took the folder and left.

Next moning he wa waiting. Lurking in an anbu black op's bedroom. Lurking aound. Waiting to see when he could stike. Now. As he lay down copletley relaxed Shonzo was about to pounce when a kuni came through the bed. Inches from his eye.

''Come out''

Shonzo rolled from under the bed. How did he know. Well these onbu were the elite, right?

''What do you want''

Shonzo held the folder up opening it to the anatomy section. After staring at it hard the onbu looked at him dead in the eyes.

'Kid, i dont know how you got these files but this is some serious stuff. Why do you care anyways?''

The onbu seemed kind enough. Shonzo raised his hand and made a bone knife.

''Oh'' He said simply

''Listen. This guy. His powers. Yours. Im sorry kid. They give you...a fatal disease.''

Shonzo reamined passive. Inside he was shaking. Scared. He needed someone. Anyone. He shiverd inside yet outsidhe was as cool as a winter breeze. He backed out of the wondow and dropped. Why him? Why? He could never be nomal. He looked diffrent from the others. Reacted in diffrent ways. Yet. Deep down. He wanted the chance to experiance life. To grab it with both hands andnever let go. Now...It would end.

Shonzo wouldnt let that happen. He was going to find out how to stop this. And fo that. He would have to find the worldsbest medical ninja. But she traveld with ladystunade. Shonzo ran. Where? To the sand village. Shnzo had heard a sense talking about a big casiono there and Shonzo had heard stunade was quite the gambeler.

so the journey began Shonzo ate what he killed. He killed whathe found. Weather it was a rabbit or a deer. Shonzo had an hour rest for eery five hour travel. He was there in three days. He walked through the disgusting and dilpitated streets. He was two streets away from a gaint cascino. A source of bright flashing lights and the sound of dopping coins when suddenly three lage figure stood in his way. Shonzo had no time for these fools. He Shot a bone pelet into one o them. He dropped silently before the others could even pull thier wepons.

They both used a jutsu to summon large swords. Pathetic. Wepons. He had no time for this. He raised his hands as if to submit but then made two bone shuriken. He threw them at intense speeds. They fell. Their clan was weak. Their kekegenki. Pathetic. Shonzo's clock was ticking and he had no time to waste.

Kimimaru nterd his thoughts once more. Is the reason he had not been so well known because he was dead. Because of a disease. Shonzo didnt know what he would do. A woman with pink hai came unning at Shonzo followed by a small pig. He was about to talk to them when the woman in the pink hair, pressumably lady stunade threw a punch. Shonzo increased hs bone density hrty fold yet it still managed to crack his chest.

The bones in his chest broke. He just stood there. Why? The clock had been sped up it apeared. Stunade looked at the weapons then at him realising her mistake. Shonzo found it har to breah all the sudden. He couldnt move in a straight ine as he went to lean on Stunade for support her fell.

Conciousness flashed infront of him like a yo-yo. One minute he was looking in a hospital bedroom celling. The next he was just seeing black. He awoke again. This time to a vision of beauty. Shonzo gripped her hand. She appeared shockedbut didnt resist. As their lips touched he sank into the icy depht of unconiousness.

He awoke in bandages. He was looking a Stunade this time wondering if the girl was ever real. He watched her inntently.

''Good news is, your alive. Bad news is. You wont be fot much longer''

She explained how only the rarest dessert flower could cure him. As soon as he got the description he was standing. Peeling off hi hospital clothes infront o his guests as they looked away red faced. Shonzo put on his normal gey clothes. He needed som way to travel. Some way fast.

He walked to the great engineers shop in the high street.

''I need something. Something that flies. Somethings that goes extremley fast.''

The old man smiled from behind the counter top. He weeled out a bike that had four wings on it. Thi was a bit bulky for a bike though.

''This is a motobke. No one has been razy enough toride it yet but itll do.''

Shonzo looked at it.

''Do you have a large open space?''

''Sure, round back''

Shonzo looked around. it was big enough. Baerley. Shonzo held out his hand. Whitepoured from it as it twisted ad turned in a bal. Remoulding itself into an exact replica of the bike but in pure white. Shonzo paid the man for giving hhim blue prints for other ontraptions that might be useful. This gave Shonzo a stomach cramp. He fell to the floor. The pain was in his bones. This is what the disseasmust do.

Shonzo was flying his new bone bike through the desert. Hed been searching for days on end. Every day brang him nearer to his inal bow. He wasd clos he could feel it. Thats when he ran into trouble. A woman screaming for help. Shonzo was aot to help her when he noticda sand storm. Shonzo would have to be quick when he saw something else. The flower.

Shonzo was ow on chakra because that is that his bike ran on. He went for the flower. Got it. He ate. The taste nearly mde him puke. The bike's engines bgean to stop and start randomly. He couldnt make it to the woman.

Shonzo lay in the sand defeated and dying. He wouldnt be able to help. He could here her scream. If he cold just muster the enegy...

He felt something deep within him. A voice like no other.

'' I am your kyuubi. Fight Shonzo. Live. Later in your years you will be able to access my power fully but for now. You have to LIVE!

Shonzo felt it. The voice was from within him. *PUKE*. Shonzo vommited He had been told this would happen as the toxins and deaseas left his body. He would live. Looking around for his Chakra bike he ran to it. He rode it to the woman. She was trapped.

''They stole her! The stole my poor cristie''

''Look ladie we have to leave.''

''They have my baby girl!''

''ll come back later. I promise. But theres no point in you dying out here because then she wont have a mother to come back too''

He then picked her up and dropped her behindhim onthe bike. Turning to se he saaan storm wa right behind him. Litterally a wall of sand only 10 feet away. Shonzo Flooded his chakra into the bike as it began to speed of. Not enough to take flight yet.

''Listen. Lady. Do you know bout chakra?''

''I am a mother not a moron'' She snapped then adding

'I can minipulate sand to a digree.''

''Then thatd be helpful. Funel your chakra into he bike.''

It was a boost but not fast enouh. Shonzo raced over sand dunes using them as ramps. Thats it. He went through as many sand dunes as possible. That was a mistake. Shonzo realised it wasnt working becayse as soon as he went ver one sand dune the stom wiped it away like a sweetie rapper.

''Quick. Turn the dunes into ramps''

Shonzo lost the boost as she funneld her chakra into something else. The dune he was attempting to go out flatend and became a smoother ride as he ent up it. They soared through the air for at least ten seconds. hmm.

''Funnel your chakra in he next time you make on a ramp.''

Shonzo's jaw dropped. A dune came that was massive. Shonzo was still riding up it at top speed for ten mintes later always ahead of the storm by just a few meters. Then suddenly he felt a boost like no other. She was yelling as she poured all her chakra into it. Too much?

''What are you doing! Youll die if you keep this up''

''Just promise youll find my baby girl.''

Shonzo felt her chakra fading. He felt so helpless. They had been trying to outpace it for nearly an hour now.

''We can do this together! We can live.''

Shonzo fumbeled in his poket for a chakra pill but they were gone.

''Please just promise me!''

''We can do this''

Desperation filled Shonzo's voice. He took one hand off he bike and tried to remove hers.

She fought him. They storm was catching up again. Noo. As they left the giant dune he engaged the thrusters but there wasnt enough power. She sceamed as she poured what seemed to be her soul into he bike.

''NOOOO. NOO. COME BACK!''

She slipped of the bike lifelessly. Shonzo didnt kow hat to do. Then the storm stopped. What!
He saw a who village of sand people. They were laughing holding her dead body like a trophy. A tear fell from Shonzo's face for the first time. Shonzo had another hidden power apart from his new found kyuubi. He had beserker blood in him. He had though of it as just a roumer the students told. nother excue for them to avoid him. It was known to be carried by most males anyway.

Foam dripped from shonzo's mouth as he cut out the engines. When he was en feet of the ground he jumped off. He absorbed the imapct in aseies of new bones he had made for himself. A giant splash of sand was made along with a small cloud.

''Tell the girl to stop whinng. We have her mumy now''

This pushed Shonzo oer the edge. A raider group of sand benders. How could this happen.

''Look at this. We got company guys and it looks like he has rabies''

They laughed mokingly. Shonzo used his mud clones and send themm under ground. They began pulling random people under ground and throwing up thier dead bodies. They knew he was serious now. He pulled out a big bone sword. Look at them amitures. Their stances were lazy and they looked weak. Then the sand beneath him began to twist and turn. A gaint snake apeared. A sand demon. They were all controling it simoultaiously. He ran. Jumping and digging his sword into the back of the snakes neck.

As he slid down the back he landed behind it in the middle of the raiders. He sliced the sword through ones heart and went on a rampage. He was chopping off limbs and hacking away vital organs. He eventually got to a mobile carridge. Tierd and panting. Eery time he killed one of the raiders a bt of the snake fell away. Now all that remaided was a gaint slither and for the first time. It lunged. He jumped over it shootig bone pellets but just like his mud clones it reformed itself. It then reshot his own pellets at him. He was hit and was sent sprawling.

Ignoring the pain the next time it lunged he simply side stepped it and chopped off its head. It fell to the ground. He found a tent. The very last of them were there. He shot bone pellets into them. He took the girl outside as they walked on a mas of dead bodies coverd in blood. He burried the mother explaining to the little girl what happend.

She looked at him scared his beserker mode begining to fade. They rode back to the sand village were he tacked down her father and left. After a night of deaming about the woman. How he was to helpless Too pathetic to help. He was ready to go home





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Re: A dissease? A great power?

Post  Shikei on Sun Jun 13, 2010 6:06 am

I know you havent done yet, but you dont have the kyuubi or any tailed beast inside you, and you never will...
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Re: A dissease? A great power?

Post  Shonzo on Sun Jun 13, 2010 2:50 pm

Why not?...i have my own plans and if i am op you can deny it but i have done nothing

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Re: A dissease? A great power?

Post  Shikei on Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:42 am

I will deny it, its not fair on everyone else and plus we have a special treat coming up for everyone once they become chunin, not revealing yet. Having a kyuubi inside you, even if its weak will make you better than everyone else, and will be unfair as other people will want one to. And kyuubi is narutos beats, Kyuubi = Nine Tailed Fox
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