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Tagato the lonley soul

Post  lozorus on Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:41 am

Name: Tagato Komoro

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Appearance: About four foot five. Short spikey white hair. A very light build. Has blue eyes. He has pearl white teeth and is very defined.

Village: Hidden leaf

Bloodline: Renneigan - gets stronger as he dose

Bio: Dagoseye was kicked out of the small settlement he had lived on when his parents found out that he had the ability of Renneigan. He was also extremley clever and fast. When he was four he discoverd the uncanny ability to fight. Although he excelled at jutsu he wanted to refine his skills on tijutsu. He has massive amounts of chakra and can quite easily cast them however he had always loved the art of fighting.

Personality: Independant and instinctual

Abilities:

Tichacsu - Fights using chakra enfused blows. Can efine or expand the blow depending on what effect he wants

Boneless - allows the user to become extremley agile whilst at the same time being powerul. They can bend thier bodies in unimaginable ways

Item: Gaint blade on a training chain

Other: He has never creid before in his life....Ever and he is also interested in becomeing medical ninja.


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Post  Shikei on Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:32 am

The abilities..Wow, OP even though they would be at a weak state. The first one is similar to shadow possession and next is like sharingan. The bio is also abit...well basically no outcast with the rinnegan would really be allowed in the village. So all you need to do is get rid of 1 ability, but change the one you have to something else, and change the bio abit.
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Post  lozorus on Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:46 am

I meant for it to be like the chakra they se to control puppets... And renniegan is supposed to enable you to do any jutsu but that wopuld be to over powerd...

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Post  Guest on Sat Jun 05, 2010 5:54 am

You can't make another character untill you pass the graduation.

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Post  Shikei on Sat Jun 05, 2010 6:46 am

True, so stick with the first character application, and try to keep you char not 'weal' but academy student worth.
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Post  Shikei on Wed Jun 09, 2010 8:44 am

Changed it again i see, wont you ever stop lol. Im watching you in our post btw, 1 more wrong thing and u mite miss the saga
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